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The pain began to hurt
I didn't know how to take it
They all wanted me then,
And still do now.

If you suddenly returned;
Do you think I've missed it?
A little g1rl who loved her bruises
And those tired red eyes she'd lay to rest
How long did it take you little g1rl,
Before you learned to just shut up
and stop your screaming?
Everyone did hear you.
How could most of you watch?
If you all saw me now
Would it get you off?


Those moments i still live in,
and they play in my head.
Watch it live, and place your bets.
I already know this ending.
My own films i star in,
A box set series
always on sale.

She Gives them what they want
They love it,
Their eyes still live around me.
What a good g1rl.
Little g1rl, why do you seem to love it?
She marks it down every time it happens.


It's a confession
one would not like to hear,
One you'd thought i'd never tell,
And it gets me off,
to let you know what you've done.
It's ruined my life.




Photographer, m0del, words all me.
Copyright © 2007 Akourah

Do not steal or use as stock, do not duplicate my words either. Thankyou for your comments.

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:iconsektorhp:
wow... strong and kinda depressing... which is good in a way cos it means that your work actually evoked a feeling in me! kudos and :+fav:
:iconsouthernman:
Oh my! Very powerful, yet very sad, both the pic and the poem. Would you mind if I added this to my Weekly Journal Features next Saturday? Just let me know! Awesome job! :rose:

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The pioneers of a warless world are the youth who refuse military service: Albert Einstein

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:iconakourah:
Go right ahead, be my pleasure.

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I become tamed by devouring my own wings.

:iconsouthernman:
Thank you so much! I believe people need to see this pic and read the poem with it. Hope you're having a nice weekend! :)

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The pioneers of a warless world are the youth who refuse military service: Albert Einstein

My website: [link]
:icondeceiving-smile:
wow. i loved the pic so i clicked for a closer look - and then the poem...woah! its brilliant! i love it! i love the whole thing. whoever it is in the picture is beautiful.

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...to dream of the person you could be is a waste of the person you are....
:iconstrabbo:
Now i wanna sniff some glue...

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The worst you wrote it´s better than the best you didn´t write...
:iconbdbx:
Wow great pic and the poem I realy liked. Both are just filled with emotion. Made me wana cry....
:iconakourah:
Try cough syrup.

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I become tamed by devouring my own wings.

:iconinsane-thing:
absolutely beautiful.. sad but beautiful.. your works are always so powerful, angel.. i always end up with my eyes soaked in tears
:hug:
:iconwohmatak:
Giving what they want means taking away what you ARE... never do that. But I guess I don't have to tell you

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Heaven is not a place. It's a feeling -- ~skipra

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